by Fa-So-La-La
The Sacred and the Sacredly Ordained
Are marked by order--
Covenants and cells
A Mighty Wonder.
Humanity is selfish squalor--
It cannot see
Beauties in Him-- but only--
Divinity of Me.
April 7, 2005
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A funny story about this poem-- when I finished writing it I handed it to The Shieldmaiden to read and comment, and she, misenterpreting my, um, eccentric shall we say handwriting, exclaimed in aesthetic indignation- "Humanity is selfish SQUEALERS?"
Come to think of it, we're that too. :-)
Ahhh, finally Fa-So-La-La reveals one of her own poems. Good. Very good. I hope this is the first of many such revelations.
(She's prolific, but secretive; has been for years.)
Yessss, very sneaky preciousssss.
Wantsss more birthday pressentsess.
why do you hide your talent
(dramatic groan)
sorry for the rather strange preceding post, i was having a bad day
*awed voice*
That's very good.
Wow. Very good. Mine never turn out like that. (Yes I right poems. I have to for lit.)
Me? I don't write poems unless I have too, but i have to say fa-so-la-la, I think you have some-what of a talent.
I'm not a person who should comment though because I'm not very good myself.
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